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John James

184 words · 11 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 72 / 100
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Claims 58%The ask 30%Reasoning 12%

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Claims · 93 wordsNigeria is the deadliest place on Earth to be a Christian today.Unearned certainty Since 2019, tens of thousands of Christians in Nigeria have been slaughtered as part of a sustained pattern of religiously motivated violence by jihadis, ignored or enabled by the Nigerian Government.1 Extremist groups like Boko Haram are allowed to operate without any meaningful response from authorities.Off point A courageous leader named Mazi Nnamdi Kanu was convicted in a farce show trial for speaking out about what is happening.2 He is currently serving a life sentence in prison, convicted on false terrorism charges.3 The ask · 55 wordsI implore my colleagues to support my resolution, H. Res. 1321 calling on the Nigerian Government to conduct another trial in accordance with its own Constitution based on: evidence, with access to legal counsel, medical care and international law pertaining to humane conditions of detention, or, better yet, release Mazi Nnamdi Kanu immediately and unconditionally.No reason given Claims · 14 wordsAmerica gives billions to Nigeria.4Logical leap We will not continue to fund a Christian genocide.Vague promise Reasoning · 22 wordsWe have the moral obligation to stand up so our Christian brothers and sisters can worship the Lord, our God, in peace.Off point

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