Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Edward J. Markey

358 words · 17 sentences · 26 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
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Reasoning 25%Positioning 18%Claims 21%Procedure 4%Promise 25%Thanks 8%

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Mr. President, Reasoning · 16 wordsthe objection we just heard is exactly why this law to protect Haiti TPS is necessary, Logical leapPositioning · 22 wordsand I am incredibly disappointed in my Republican colleagues for turning their backs on the Haitian TPS community in this dire time.Positioning Claims · 75 wordsTPS represents America’s longstanding commitment to serve as a beacon of hope and refuge for the vulnerable. To honor and to protect Haitian TPS holders is a moral duty. It is also an acknowledgment of the immense contributions TPS holders make to our families, to our neighborhoods. And for years, TPS holders have reliably, patiently, and emphatically offered stability and dignity and security to so many. The Senator from Missouri said the keyword is ``temporary’’; 1Reasoning · 75 wordsno, the keyword is ``protection.’’ The duration of how long it should be extended to give people protection is what we are debating here today. If the State Department says it is too dangerous for Americans to go to Haiti, then Haitians who are given TPS protections are also living with a danger that is too great for them and their families to be returned to a State Department- designated country too dangerous to visit.2 Positioning · 42 wordsThey only ask for something that is just so clear, so decent, so obvious--just the stability of preserving their status, the dignity to live without fear, the security of not being returned to danger. It is the least we owe to them.Positioning Procedure · 13 wordsBut this fight to protect Haiti and its TPS protections is not over.Procedure Promise · 88 wordsTo the families lying awake tonight afraid of what comes next: We will continue to fight for you.Vague promise To the children asking if their parents will be here in the morning: We will continue to fight for you.Vague promise To every person who did everything right, who followed the rules, who believed in the promise of America: We will continue to fight for you.Vague promise We are not done. This administration and Senate Republicans cannot take away your humanity, your dignity, your future. We are going to continue to fight, Vague promiseThanks · 27 wordsand it is my honor to be able to partner with the great Senator from Delaware, my partner in this effort, the great Senator Lisa Blunt Rochester.3Thanks

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