Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Marcy Kaptur

225 words · 12 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 35%Claims 20%Anecdote 42%Aside 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordsour northwest Ohio region is lucky to have countless educators who guide our young people and help them grow into strong leaders of tomorrow.Positioning Claims · 33 wordsOne of these educators is Andre Cowell. A retired Toledo detective now teaching criminal justice at Washington Local School District’s Whitmer High School, he brings 25 years of field experience to the classroom.1 Positioning · 10 wordsMr. Cowell’s deep compassion extends to every student he encounters.Positioning Anecdote · 38 wordsA former student at Whitmer, Alivia Garcia, who wasn’t even a student of Mr. Cowell’s, spoke so highly of the impact he made on her life, I thought it was worth sharing here in the Halls of Congress.Anecdote Aside · 6 wordsThere are such good people everywhere, AsideAnecdote · 56 wordsand he showed her true kindness in the wake of a difficult time in her life following the passing of her boyfriend.2 Mr. Cowell welcomed her into his classroom when she needed an ear to listen. He let her know if you ever need anything, I am always here, and you know where to find me.Anecdote Claims · 13 wordsHe kept his word and stays in touch with Alivia to this day.3 Positioning · 45 wordsMr. Cowell is a shining example of someone worthy of congressional recognition. The Whitmer community in northwestern Ohio is blessed to have an educator like Andre Cowell. He is a model of a man for others, sharing empathy and integrity for the generations to come.Positioning

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