Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Marlin A. Stutzman

192 words · 11 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 6%Procedure 5%Claims 46%Positioning 29%Promise 8%The ask 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chairman, Greeting · 12 wordsI thank the chairman of the Budget Committee for this strong resolution.Greeting Mr. Chairman, Procedure · 10 wordsI rise today in support of the House budget resolution.Procedure Claims · 16 wordsThis framework is an important step of protecting our elections as well as supporting our troops. Positioning · 17 wordsAs Members of Congress, we have a responsibility to the American people to safeguard the electoral process.Positioning Claims · 73 wordsYet, the Senate has been unable to do so. Over 80 percent of Americans agree that you must show proof of citizenship and ID to vote, 1and this budget framework moves us closer to enacting these reforms. In addition to protecting our elections at home, U.S. servicemembers are working day and night to be sure that Americans are safe from a nuclear bomb in Iran and to advance peace in the Middle East.2 Positioning · 23 wordsOur military is the most lethal fighting force known to man, and they are depending on us to help them finish the job.PositioningVague promise Promise · 16 wordsWe must be courageous to support these men and women by supplying the resources they need.Vague promise Positioning · 16 wordsWe owe Americans secure elections along with a strong national defense to preserve our great Nation.Positioning The ask · 9 wordsTherefore, I urge my colleagues to support this resolution.

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