Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Brendan F. Boyle

735 words · 40 sentences · 48 clauses

Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 6%Claims 84%Positioning 6%Aside 1%Reasoning 3%

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Mr. Chair, Procedure · 9 wordsI yield myself such time as I may consume.Procedure Mr. Chair, Claims · 69 wordsas you may recall, 2 years ago, in the election that my good friend the chair referenced, Donald Trump won a whopping landslide of 1\1/2\ points, one of the closest national popular votes in American history, for those keeping score.1 During that election, he campaigned in my State, the Commonwealth of Pennsylvania, more than any other in the country. The promise he most often recited at every rally was, Procedure · 6 wordsand these were his exact words: ProcedureClaims · 8 wordsI will lower your costs on day one.2Off point Mr. Chair, Positioning · 4 wordswhat an abject failure.Positioning Claims · 93 wordsThis Presidency, and the rubberstamp Republicans who enable him, have pushed through an agenda that hasn’t lowered costs for the American people. It has only made things far more expensive. He started over a year ago with the Trump tariff taxes, a tax on most imported goods. On average, this has raised costs by about $1,800 a year for the American family.3 He then doubled down on that last summer, in July of last year, when the rubberstamp Republicans passed, 4and the President signed what he used to call the big, beautiful bill, Positioning · 11 wordswhich has become the big, ugly law for the American people.Positioning Claims · 145 wordsThat bill makes healthcare more expensive for the American people while cutting off their food assistance at a time that food prices are through the roof.5Off point Now, here we are, after all of that. We have the Republican reconciliation 3.0. I think that both parties would agree--in fact, the two Presidential nominees 2 years ago happened to, in a rare point of agreement, but they happened to agree that the number one issue on people’s minds by far was the affordability crisis, that America had become too expensive. Isn’t it interesting that despite the fact that polls continue to show by an overwhelming majority that is the biggest issue that voters care about, we have in front of us the Republican reconciliation 3.0, 47 pages, 6,560 words, not one word about affordability, not one word about how to bring down costs for the American people.6 Positioning · 22 wordsThey are not even trying. We have a President who just doesn’t care about the average American family and the affordability crisis.Positioning Procedure · 6 wordsDon’t take my word for it.Procedure Claims · 29 wordsTake the President’s own words. ``I don’t think about Americans’ financial situation.’’7Off point This bill reflects that fact. We have in this bill almost $100 billion in new deficit spending.8 Procedure · 4 wordsYes, that is right.Procedure Claims · 99 wordsThe same crowd that loves to cry crocodile tears about deficit and debt whenever there is a President in the White House who is a Democrat, cumulatively now they have added $5 trillion to our national debt, more than any other 18-month period in the history of Congress.9 They are about to add $100 billion more. Most of that spending is for President Trump’s Iran war, a reckless decision with absolutely no plan on how to achieve victory and how it would end. The American people paid the price for President Trump’s war in terms of dollars and cents. Procedure · 5 wordsJust look at gas prices.Procedure Claims · 72 wordsThe day before the war was launched, the national average for a gallon of gas was $2.98.10 Today, it is over $4 a gallon and climbing.11Off point Here, we have another reconciliation bill in front of us--nothing in there whatsoever to bring down costs, nothing to lower gas prices, nothing to lower food prices, nothing to lower the cost of consumer goods, just more spending on the most unpopular war in American history. Aside · 9 wordsThat might sound like an exaggeration, a Trumpian exaggeration.Aside Procedure · 5 wordsNo, it is a fact.Procedure Claims · 49 wordsGoing back to the beginning of polling almost a century ago, there is no other war in American history in which the American people, by a more than 2-to-1 margin, disapprove over approve.12 Only 30 percent of the American people approve of what the President is doing in Iran.13 Procedure · 4 wordsIt is no wonder.Procedure Claims · 5 wordsThey are paying the cost. Reasoning · 19 wordsOf course, as expensive as it is for the American family, that doesn’t measure up to the ultimate cost: Claims · 10 wordsthose lives that we have lost already in this war.Off point Mr. Chair, Claims · 37 wordsit is quite clear from the President’s own words and the written text of this bill that this President and the Republican majority have no plan whatsoever on how to bring costs down for the American people.Unearned certainty Positioning · 8 wordsWhat is worse, they are not even trying.Positioning Mr. Chair, Procedure · 7 wordsI reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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