Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Adam Smith

885 words · 62 sentences · 86 clauses

Statement grade
D–
42 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 62%Positioning 13%Procedure 8%Reasoning 5%The ask 9%Anecdote 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Claims · 26 wordswe stumbled into a conflict in the dumbest way imaginable.Hidden agency In the history of the United States of America, we have made some mistakes in wars. Positioning · 12 wordsThis was about as idiotic a thing as I have ever seen, PositioningClaims · 42 wordsand the cost is to the global economy, our reputation, instability in the Middle East, the loss of service members, and thousands of people wounded. I know a lot of people say, well, it is terrible because Trump never had a plan. Procedure · 11 wordsIt is actually a hell of a lot worse than that.Procedure Claims · 103 wordsHe had a plan. His plan was that he was going to bomb Iran for 4 weeks, 1and they were going to give up. That was literally his plan. People told him in his own administration that was idiotic. It wasn’t going to happen, but he did it anyway. Then, when it didn’t work, he just thinks if we drop a few more bombs--here we are. We keep hearing about how the Iranian military is completely obliterated. It is gone. They are defeated, yet the missiles and the drones keep coming. People in the region keep dying, and our service members keep dying. Procedure · 6 wordsThat is not just a mistake.Procedure Positioning · 19 wordsThat is living in an alternative universe. That is not living in the world that we are actually in, PositioningClaims · 4 wordsand the war continues.Off point Reasoning · 20 wordsAs we support anything in the defense area, we are de facto supporting this war with no end in sight. Procedure · 7 wordsThe way the President talks about it: ProcedureClaims · 18 wordsOh, we are going to take Kharg Island.2 We can take Kharg Island. It won’t be a problem. Reasoning · 21 wordsThat is insane if you actually follow the military plans. Maybe you can take it, but you have to hold it. Claims · 9 wordsThey are going to be lobbing missiles at you. Positioning · 23 wordsWe are in an incredibly serious business, and the President is talking about this like it is some sort of bad fiction novel.Positioning The ask · 8 wordsWe have to hold them accountable for that, Procedure · 9 wordsand it is not just the war in Iran.Procedure Claims · 43 wordsWe are engaged in a major conflict in Latin America right now, 3which people don’t know about. We are fighting narcoterrorists. We are still blowing up boats.4 We are partnering with various different countries and killing people down there, all with no transparency. Procedure · 9 wordsThen, we have what is going on in Europe.Procedure Claims · 84 wordsWe periodically threaten to pull troops out of Europe.5 The President and the Vice President and others talk about Europe facing civilizational erasure and really focused on that issue of pulling back from supporting them in any way because--what?--we are not allies and partners. The strongest alliance, NATO, in the history of this country is regularly denigrated by our President. Now, I know that people want to kid themselves and say, ``Look, he is just doing it so that our NATO partners step up. Positioning · 17 wordsThat is all we want to do,’’ but that is not why he is just doing it.Positioning Procedure · 7 wordsI will give you a great example: ProcedureAnecdote · 27 wordsHungary. I was talking with a Department of Defense official the other day. He said our plan in Europe is actually working because NATO is stepping up, AnecdoteClaims · 37 wordsand, crucial to that, was that Orban lost so that Hungary supported the support for Ukraine, 6but our President and Vice President were supporting keeping the dictator in charge of Hungary so that never would have happened. Positioning · 6 wordsWe are in incredibly dangerous times, PositioningClaims · 38 wordsand then, we have the President’s use of our military domestically, which he has done. He gives a speech talking about election interference, leaving us all to wonder is he going to honor the outcome of this election. Positioning · 34 wordsWhat is our obligation to make sure that he does? We are not in normal times. I am also deeply concerned about Secretary Hegseth and the way he is running the Department of Defense.Positioning Claims · 68 wordsHe, too, has no idea what is happening in Iran, or how we are ever going to get out of that war, but he has also talked about giving no quarter to our enemies. We accidentally bombed a girl’s school and killed 145 civilians.7 I don’t know how long ago now, 3 or 4 months ago. It is obvious we did it. We won’t take responsibility for it. Procedure · 10 wordsThen, the Secretary of Defense comes out and says publicly: ProcedureClaims · 44 wordsNo quarter for our enemy. He has served in the military. He knows what that means--no survivors. The President talks about erasing the Iranian civilization. He talks about bombing civilian targets. Never would the United States of America have done any of those things. Positioning · 8 wordsWe are in an incredibly, incredibly dangerous time.PositioningOff point Procedure · 11 wordsI wish to maintain the bipartisan nature of this bill--I do, ProcedureClaims · 7 wordsand I know that the chairman does. The ask · 68 wordsBut if we are going to do this, we are going to need some Republicans to stand up to the President of the United States and say, no. No, we are not going to get you $1.6 trillion.8 No, we are not just going to give you a blank check for a war that is totally out of control, not going anywhere, and with no end in sight. Procedure · 5 wordsI keep hearing people say: ProcedureClaims · 24 wordsWell, we just have to finish the job, like we are cleaning out the garage, and if we just stick at it long enough--Off point

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