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Donald Norcross

Democrat on National Defense Authorization Act for Fiscal Year 2027 2026-07-22

296 words · 13 sentences · 19 clauses

Statement grade

A–

Average 88 / 100

A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.

Procedure 7%Claims 71%Positioning 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Procedure · 7 wordsI rise in opposition to this amendment.Procedure Claims · 24 wordsThis amendment requires a report to outline the option for reducing the Department of Defense civilian workforce by 200,000 workers, a very arbitrary number.¹ Positioning · 32 wordsIt is truly stunning, a continuation of unprecedented attacks on our Federal civilian workforce that we have seen under this administration led by the very top, by President Trump and his Cabinet.Positioning Claims · 117 wordsI will remind my colleagues that President Trump established DOGE last year, ²which resulted in cuts across the entire Federal workforce of over 280,000 employees.³Off point Since then, the Federal Government, and particularly the Department of Defense, has absolutely hemorrhaged critical talent, institutional knowledge, and subject-matter experts across our workforce, the men and women that we cannot afford to lose. Over the last year, we have already seen reductions across the Department of Defense workforce by about 10 percent, over 78,000 workers.⁴ In fact, the GAO, the Government Accountability Office, already did a study on the Department of Defense’s implementation of the 2025 reductions.⁵ They put out their findings in a report on May 29 of this year.⁶ Procedure · 5 wordsThis is what they found: ProcedureClaims · 70 wordsThe Department of Defense did not consistently analyze the impacts on the civilian workforce reduction either in `25 or in prior years.⁷ A study has been done, and they did absolutely nothing with it. Instead, we are taking up this amendment, which arbitrarily seeks recommendations to reach a target of 200,000 people in reduction before we even understand the impacts of the last set of cuts that have taken place. Positioning · 33 wordsUnfortunately, in our country and our national security, we already are paying the price for these reckless attacks on our hardworking men and women who keep our workforce and our Defense Department running.Positioning Procedure · 8 wordsWhat we absolutely already know is these firings--ProcedureUnearned certainty

At a glance

Lost points for

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What the tags mean

Signal · 70

5 of 7 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “I rise in opposition to this amendment.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “It is truly stunning, a continuation of unprecedented attacks on our Federal civilian workforce that we have seen under this administration led by the very top, by President Trump and his Cabinet.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “This is what they found:”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “Unfortunately, in our country and our national security, we already are paying the price for these reckless attacks on our hardworking men and women who keep our workforce and our Defense Department running.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “What we absolutely already know is these firings--”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · 95

1 of 7 deductions are Relevance

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.

Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate.What the tags mean “which resulted in cuts across the entire Federal workforce of over 280,000 employees.”Offers DOGE workforce cut statistics unrelated to the amendment’s report requirement.

Respect · no score

Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Clarity · 100

1 of 7 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Something stated as certain with nothing to back it.What the tags mean “What we absolutely already know is”Asserts certain knowledge as established without citing any source for what follows.

Claims · 7

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“requires a report to outline the option for reducing the Department of Defense civilian workforce by 200,000 workers”The amendment under debate requires a report outlining an option to reduce the Department of Defense civilian workforce by 200,000 workers.search
2“President Trump established DOGE last year”President Trump established DOGE (the Department of Government Efficiency) in 2025.search
3“cuts across the entire Federal workforce of over 280,000 employees”Federal workforce cuts under DOGE have exceeded 280,000 employees.search
4“reductions across the Department of Defense workforce by about 10 percent, over 78,000 workers”The Department of Defense civilian workforce was reduced by about 10 percent, over 78,000 workers, over the last year.search
5“the GAO, the Government Accountability Office, already did a study on the Department of Defense’s implementation of the 2025 reductions”The Government Accountability Office conducted a study of the Department of Defense’s implementation of the 2025 workforce reductions.search
6“They put out their findings in a report on May 29 of this year.”The GAO published its report findings on May 29, 2026.search
7“The Department of Defense did not consistently analyze the impacts on the civilian workforce reduction either in `25 or in prior years.”The GAO report found that the Department of Defense did not consistently analyze the impacts of civilian workforce reductions in 2025 or prior years.search

Analyzed on 2026-09-15