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Average 92 / 100
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Greeting 3%Thanks 13%Claims 81%The ask 3%
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Mr. Chair, Greeting · 8 wordsI rise in support of Amendment No. 158.GreetingThanks · 32 wordsAmendment No. 158 is extremely important to the Arkansas National Guard.That is why I am grateful to have the support of my Arkansas colleagues, Rep.Steve Womack and Rep.Rick Crawford.ThanksClaims · 202 wordsThis amendment supports the Arkansas National Guard by seeking to codify the proposed land exchange between the Arkansas National Guard and the U.S. Army Reserve on Camp Robinson in North Little Rock.1Currently, there is a strategic mismatch in facility use for the Arkansas National Guard and the USAR on Camp Robinson.The land exchange will include a two-star division headquarters at Camp Pike, currently occupied by a drilling unit with minimal full-time staff, a unit whose needs would be far better served by an armory.The second is the Chappell Armory in Arkansas, which was built for traditional drilling units but currently operates as a full-time headquarters.Amendment No. 158 seeks a no-cost land exchange between the Arkansas National Guard and USAR.2This would result in a mutually beneficial outcome and ensure better stewardship of taxpayer dollars.The Arkansas National Guard and the U.S. Army Reserve support the conveyance.3I am pleased that there has been a signed a Memorandum of Agreement (MOA) between Brigadier General Bridges of the Arkansas Guard and Brigadier General Cook of the Army Reserves.4Amendment No. 158 directly relates to the signed MOA, and it ensures the necessary continuity and stability for the proposed land exchange.Vague promiseThe ask · 8 wordsI urge my colleagues to support this amendment.