Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Robert P. Bresnahan, Jr.

180 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
C
62 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 5%Claims 12%Anecdote 62%Reasoning 10%The ask 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chairman, Procedure · 9 wordsI rise in strong support of this en bloc, ProcedureClaims · 22 wordswhich includes an amendment that calls on the President to award the Medal of Honor to Colonel Bob Graham of Nuangola, Pennsylvania.1 Anecdote · 112 wordsOn May 1, 1966, at the height of Operation Birmingham in the Vietnam war, then-Captain Graham flew his battle-damaged F-100 Super Sabre through monsoon weather to reach American troops surrounded by 4,000 enemy soldiers.2 He made more than 15 low-level attack passes under heavy artillery fire, knowing full well he may not survive.3 He not only survived, but destroyed eight enemy gun positions, neutralized over 1,500 enemy troops, 4and broke the back of that assault, saving hundreds of American lives. Colonel Graham flew over 500 combat missions across four tours in Vietnam and served this country faithfully for 26 years.5 He already earned the Silver Star for his heroic actions that day.6Anecdote Reasoning · 18 wordsHowever, it is past time that we recognize his actions went above and beyond the call of duty. The ask · 19 wordsI urge my colleagues to support this and finally give Colonel Graham the recognition he has long since earned.

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