Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Ashley Hinson

337 words · 18 sentences · 24 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
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Claims 81%Reasoning 14%Positioning 3%Procedure 2%

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Mr. Chair, Claims · 19 wordsthis amendment would prohibit foreign nationals from designated countries of concern from accessing nonpublic areas of any national laboratory.1 Reasoning · 20 wordsThis straightforward measure would protect the integrity of America’s national labs and the sensitive research that underpins our national security. Claims · 57 wordsFor years, we know that the Chinese Communist Party has executed sweeping, coordinated campaigns to acquire American tech and innovation by any means necessary.Unearned certainty Last month, Mr. David Shedd, the former Acting Director of Defense Intelligence Agency, said: 2Efforts blending cyber espionage, human intelligence, academic collaboration, and commercial investments have fueled China’s rapid military and economic rise. Positioning · 6 wordsThis should concern all of us.Positioning Claims · 23 wordsCongress passed a law 2 years ago which prohibited foreign nationals from China, Russia, Iran, 3and North Korea from accessing our weapons labs. Reasoning · 18 wordsThis was an important first step, but now we must address the same vulnerabilities in our science labs. Claims · 74 wordsThese are labs where sensitive but unclassified work on artificial intelligence, quantum technologies, and advanced computing are performed. These are the very labs that the President has tasked with executing the Genesis Mission, a modern-day Manhattan Project, to ensure that the United States wins the race for AI dominance.4 Yet, at the same time, we are allowing thousands of nontraditional intelligence collectors from our competitors and greatest adversaries to operate inside of these facilities. Positioning · 4 wordsWe know China’s playbook.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 38 wordsThe CCP will weaponize any expertise it gains militarily, commercially, or economically. Our adversaries are running sophisticated espionage campaigns while we are rolling out the red carpet for thousands of these foreign nationals from proven countries of concern. Reasoning · 9 wordsThis is a direct threat to our national security. Mr. Chair, Claims · 62 wordsthis amendment simply closes a known vulnerability. It prohibits foreign nationals from countries of concern from accessing any nonpublic area of a national laboratory that receives Defense funding.5 Building on those actions taken 2 years ago, this amendment protects the Genesis project and mission and ensures that America, not our adversaries, will reap the benefits of scientific breakthroughs that our scientists achieve. Mr. Chair, Procedure · 7 wordsI reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

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