Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Burgess Owens

189 words · 12 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
C
63 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 12%Claims 21%Thanks 53%The ask 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 23 wordsI rise today to honor a beloved Utah family whose lives were lost this past week in a flash flood in Wayne County.1Greeting Claims · 39 wordsProvo Fire Captain Spencer Long; 2his wife, Katrina; 3and their three sons, Reid, Thayne, 4and Gage, were camping when they were caught in floodwaters.5 They are survived by their daughter and sister, Lydia, who now faces this unimaginable loss.6 Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 85 wordsthe Longs are among the very best Utah has to offer. Utahns mourn together. No words will adequately express the profound loss that Lydia is now experiencing. On behalf of Utah, we offer our deepest condolences to her, Provo Fire & Rescue, the city of Mona, and all those who loved the Longs. To many, the thought of continuing without them is unimaginable. Yet, we hold fast in the Heavenly Father’s promise that the Lord is near unto them that are of a broken heart.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 16 wordstoday we pray that His presence be especially near Lydia and all of those who mourn.Thanks Mr. Speaker, The ask · 26 wordsI ask you to join me in a moment of silence. For Lydia and those who mourn the Longs’ passing, may God bless and comfort you.

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