A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
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Mr. President, Thanks · 42 wordsI would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation to Ella for her hard work as an intern in my Washington, DC, office.I recognize her efforts and contributions to my office, as well as to the State of Wyoming.ThanksClaims · 67 wordsElla is a native of Jackson, WY.1Ella is currently enrolled at the University of Southern California, 2where she is pursuing a bachelor’s degree in journalism with a minor in law and social justice.3She has demonstrated a strong work ethic, which has made her an invaluable asset to our office.The quality of her work is reflected in her great efforts over the last several months.Thanks · 52 wordsI want to thank Ella for the dedication she has shown while working for me and my staff.It is a pleasure to have her as part of our team.I know she will have continued success with all of her future endeavors.I wish her all my best on her journey.Thanks