Analysis · Floor speech · beta

John Barrasso

201 words · 13 sentences · 15 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 74 / 100
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Thanks 49%Claims 51%

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Mr. President, Thanks · 45 wordsI would like to take the opportunity to express my deep appreciation to Zach for his hard work and dedication as an intern in my Sheridan, WY, office. I recognize his efforts and contributions to my office, as well as to the State of Wyoming.Thanks Claims · 103 wordsZach is from Sheridan, WY.1 He recently completed his freshman year at George Mason University where he studied political science.2 He is currently working with a Navy recruiter for enlistment in the reserves.3 After completing training, he will serve as a reservist while enrolled at Purdue, studying international affairs and participating in ROTC.4 His end goal is serving as an officer while on active duty with the U.S. Navy. He has demonstrated an exceptionally strong work ethic, which has made him an invaluable asset to our office. The quality of his work is reflected in his great efforts over the last several months. Thanks · 53 wordsI want to thank Zach for the resolute dedication he has shown while working for me and my staff. It is a pleasure to have him as part of our team. I know he will have continued success with all of his future endeavors.Vague promise I wish him all my best on his journey.Thanks

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