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Addison P. McDowell

Republican on National Defense Authorization Act for Fiscal Year 2027 2026-07-21

180 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade

Average 94 / 100

A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.

Procedure 10%Claims 58%Positioning 3%Reasoning 24%The ask 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Chair, Procedure · 10 wordstoday I rise to offer an amendment to H.R. 8800.Procedure Claims · 41 wordsMy amendment would authorize the Secretary of War to establish a school choice pilot program for members of the Armed Forces.¹ Over the past 5 years the number of States that have chosen to prioritize education freedom for parents has skyrocketed. Positioning · 6 wordsOn this issue, Americans have spoken.PositioningUnearned certainty Reasoning · 10 wordsParents must have a bigger say in their children’s education. Claims · 54 wordsDespite overwhelming support, many military families are barred from participating in school choice initiatives because they are either stationed in States without school choice or they are located in one State but domiciled in another. This amendment would authorize the War Secretary to establish a school choice pilot program for full-time Active-Duty military members.² Mr. Chair, Reasoning · 33 wordsthere is no reason why parents who are dedicating their lives in service to our country should not have the same rights as other parents to decide where their kids go to school. Claims · 9 wordsThis honors a provision in the Department’s budget request.³ Mr. Chair, The ask · 9 wordsI urge all my colleagues to support my amendment, Procedure · 8 wordsand I reserve the balance of my time.Procedure

At a glance

Lost points for

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What the tags mean

Signal · 86

4 of 5 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “today I rise to offer an amendment to H.R.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “8800.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “On this issue, Americans have spoken.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “and I reserve the balance of my time.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · 100

0 of 5 deductions are Relevance

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.

Nothing lost points.

Respect · no score

Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Clarity · 96

1 of 5 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Something stated as certain with nothing to back it.What the tags mean “Americans have spoken”Asserts a national consensus without citing any evidence or source.

Claims · 3

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“authorize the Secretary of War to establish a school choice pilot program for members of the Armed Forces”The amendment offered to H.R. 8800 would authorize the Secretary of War to establish a school choice pilot program for members of the Armed Forces.search
2“establish a school choice pilot program for full-time Active-Duty military members”The amendment would authorize establishing a school choice pilot program for full-time Active-Duty military members.search
3“This honors a provision in the Department’s budget request”The Department of Defense’s budget request includes a provision for a school choice pilot program for military families.search

Analyzed on 2026-09-15