Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Mark Takano

151 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 5%Claims 70%Positioning 6%Reasoning 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI rise in opposition to this amendment.Procedure Claims · 27 wordsThis amendment’s language opens the door to invasive, degrading, and humiliating physical examinations of children, children who simply want to play softball or join a basketball team. Positioning · 3 wordsThat is creepy.Positioning Claims · 24 wordsThis amendment would require the Department of Defense Education Activities schools to determine eligibility for girls’ sports teams based on a girl’s reproductive system.1 Positioning · 6 wordsThis amendment will empower child predators.Positioning Claims · 55 wordsWe can have a nuanced conversation about eligibility rules for elite sports teams, but this amendment is a one-size-fits-all approach that dictates the same rules for a kindergartner wanting to play soccer as a 12th grader participating in competitive basketball. It does so in the most dangerous way, by opening young girls to invasive exams. Reasoning · 29 wordsOur communities thrive when every child, including trans children, can be part of a team, learn sportsmanship, and challenge themselves. They falter when we write exclusion into our laws.

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