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Patrick Ryan

Democrat on National Defense Authorization Act for Fiscal Year 2027 2026-07-21

502 words · 18 sentences · 29 clauses

Statement grade

B+

Average 80 / 100

A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.

Greeting 2%Procedure 6%Positioning 16%Anecdote 11%Claims 41%Reasoning 17%The ask 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Chair, Greeting · 9 wordsI thank our esteemed ranking member for his leadership.Greeting Procedure · 18 wordsI am here to speak in strong opposition to the entire bill, but I do have to say: ProcedurePositioning · 37 wordsTo see folks who have never worn the uniform on this House floor try to fight culture-war BS when we are in the middle of an actual war is a grave, grave disservice to those in uniform.PositioningOff point Anecdote · 53 wordsMy opposition to this bill is deeply personal. It is personal to me. Having served 27 months in combat in Iraq, I watched us double down on a losing strategy year after year while my friends and fellow soldiers, many of whose names are on this memorial bracelet I wear, fought and died.¹Anecdote Claims · 208 wordsIt is personal to the now 18 families who lost their loved ones in this reckless war in Iran--sons, daughters, husbands, wives, somebody’s whole world.² It is personal to the hundreds more wounded, many carrying injuries that will last their entire lives from this war. It is personal to the American people, people who are working hard, doing everything that they are asked, while watching the cost of their gas, their groceries, and their utility bills skyrocket; watching the President and Hegseth spend over $100 billion of their hard-earned taxpayer dollars while they continue to flail and fail.³ Now they are trying to ask for another $1.5 trillion of my constituents’--our constituents’ taxpayer dollars to double down on this reckless, ill-conceived war.⁴ This is a straight-up betrayal from a President, by the way, who promised to end wars, not start wars; a President who has never spent a single day in uniform but is more than willing to send other people’s kids to fight in his wars; a President who is now blatantly disregarding the widely held will of the American people and the bipartisan view of this Congress as recognizing the successful passage of a War Powers Resolution by escalating this war rather than winding it down.⁵Unearned certainty Positioning · 45 wordsWe can’t let that happen. On behalf of all of our constituents, on behalf of the American people, we have to stop throwing good money after bad. We have to stop repeating the mistakes of the forever wars that my generation fought and served in.Positioning Reasoning · 85 wordsThat is why I have been fighting to include my No Funds for Iran War Act in this NDAA, to make sure we don’t spend a single penny more on this reckless forever war in the Middle East; to make sure we are investing here at home to lower housing costs, lower grocery costs, lower utility costs, and lower healthcare costs. That is what the American people want.Unearned certainty That is what I am fighting for, and that is what my colleagues here are fighting for. The ask · 37 wordsUnfortunately, Mr. Chair, since the majority has refused to include my provision in this bill, I do plan to offer a motion to recommit this bill back to committee, and I urge my colleagues to support it. Mr. Chair, Procedure · 10 wordsI include in the Record the text of my amendment.Procedure

At a glance

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What the tags mean

Signal · 63

11 of 14 deductions are Signal

Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.

Greetings and pleasantries.What the tags mean “I thank our esteemed ranking member for his leadership.”A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “I am here to speak in strong opposition to the entire bill,”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “but I do have to say:”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “To see folks who have never worn the uniform on this House floor try to fight culture-war BS when we are in the middle of an actual war is a grave, grave disservice to those in uniform.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
A story that illustrates instead of making a point.What the tags mean “My opposition to this bill is deeply personal.”An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
A story that illustrates instead of making a point.What the tags mean “It is personal to me.”An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
A story that illustrates instead of making a point.What the tags mean “Having served 27 months in combat in Iraq, I watched us double down on a losing strategy year after year while my friends and fellow soldiers, many of whose names are on this memorial bracelet I wear, fought and died.”An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “We can’t let that happen.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “On behalf of all of our constituents, on behalf of the American people, we have to stop throwing good money after bad.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it.What the tags mean “We have to stop repeating the mistakes of the forever wars that my generation fought and served in.”Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business.What the tags mean “I include in the Record the text of my amendment.”Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.

Relevance · 90

1 of 14 deductions are Relevance

Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.

Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate.What the tags mean “To see folks who have never worn the uniform on this House floor try to fight culture-war BS when we are in the middle of an actual war is a grave, grave disservice to those in uniform.”A political jab at colleagues over culture-war fights rather than an argument about the bill’s provisions.

Respect · no score

Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.

Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.

Clarity · 87

2 of 14 deductions are Clarity

Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.

Something stated as certain with nothing to back it.What the tags mean “the widely held will of the American people”Asserts what the whole public believes without citing any source or evidence.
Something stated as certain with nothing to back it.What the tags mean “That is what the American people want”A blanket claim about public preference offered with no poll or source.

Claims · 5

This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.

1“Having served 27 months in combat in Iraq”Patrick Ryan served 27 months in combat in Iraq.search
2“the now 18 families who lost their loved ones in this reckless war in Iran”18 American families have lost loved ones in the war in Iran.search
3“spend over $100 billion of their hard-earned taxpayer dollars”The President and Defense Secretary Hegseth have spent over $100 billion in taxpayer dollars on the Iran war.search
4“another $1.5 trillion of my constituents’--our constituents’ taxpayer dollars”The administration is requesting an additional $1.5 trillion in taxpayer dollars for the war in Iran.search
5“the successful passage of a War Powers Resolution”Congress has passed a War Powers Resolution concerning the war in Iran.search

Analyzed on 2026-09-15